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I’m cringing at my own copy 🥴
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The adventures of “El Copy Goat Shoving His Entire Business Into ClickFunnels” continues! Yesterday, I was moving all of my lead magnets from Carrd to ClickFunnels. And I was copy & pasting the headlines, images, design, etc… I WAS CRINGING AT MY OWN COPY! 🥴YOU FOOL! You’re better than this! Ahhh I’m utterly disgusted in myself! But at the same time… …it’s very clear that I’ve become a Super Saiyan Copywriter compared to what I was. I feel the power of salesmanship surging through my blood…. YAAAS! ⚡ So much so that I couldn’t just copy and paste my old stuff into my new system. I had to rewrite my OWN copy! Let me know show you a couple of examples… Like this one: It says… EXPERT COPYWRITER REVEALS… HOW TO GO FROM BEGINNER TO PAID WRITER BY BECOMING DANGEROUSLY PERSUASIVE WITH COPYWRITING IN JUST 2 HOURS.FOR FREE… What’s wrong with that? Seems banger, right? Well I’ll tell you what’s wrong with that, my friend… I don’t want BEGINNERS on my list! Here’s a little lesson I’ve had to learn the hard way over the years: Great copy doesn’t convert the most people, it converts the right people! And the right people for my business people who are already putting in the work. Entrepreneurs. Business owners. Copywriters who have clients. Marketers who work in house somewhere. These are the people I LOVE helping the most because they can take what I teach and immediately put it into their funnels, ads or emails and start making more money. Thus, they appreciate what I do. Whenever I get beginners, I just get a bunch of replies like “Uhh sir how to get frst copiez client plssss?” I can’t help these people. Nor do I want to. I would wake up miserable trying to help people get "first" client all day. So instead I changed the headline to this: HOW TO GO FROM SHY INTROVERT TO DANGEROUSLY PERSUASIVE WITH MODERN COPYWRITING…… FOR FREE Then I sprinkled in a little extra bullets and persuasion on there 😏 Now you may look at that and think… El Copy Goat! I like the first headline better! This one’s weaker! If you think so, then you’re not my target audience, bub. I pulled this headline straight out of my BEST CUSTOMER’S MOUTH! The people who have spent the most money with me have told me that they never felt good at sales because they’re such shy introverts… that it doesn’t come “natural” to them… And they’ve also told me that they love the “old” copy stuff but wanna see more modern examples of what works. Bada bing, bada boom. I whipped up that headline… Which is simply an extension of the MODERN DAY COPYWRITING CRASH COURSE I posted on YouTube (that has over 6,000+ views, gained me 400+ new email subscribers and already made me quite a bit of sales). So I know it works. Here’s one more… Expert Copywriter Reveals… HOW YOU CAN EASILY PUMP OUT 20-30 INSANELY PERSUASIVE ADS PER MONTH FOR META ADS ANDROMEDA USING THIS CHEAT SHEAT.(Without using generic crap from AI or “guessing” what’s going to convert) I turned that into this 👇 EX-OWNER OF MULTI-MILLION DOLLAR META ADS AGENCY REVEALS… HOW YOU CAN EASILY PUMP OUT 30+ INSANELY PERSUASIVE MODERN META ADS THAT CONVERT LIKE A BAT OUT OF HELL!…FOR FREE My first grave mistake was not using the obvious Meta Ads proof of MYSELF in the eyebrow copy first… … I freaking ran an entire meta ads agency and I chose to talk about my copywriter proof!? FOOL! Other things: “20-30 ads” → 30+ Make it CLEAR and SIMPLE. Also, I went for the double whammy… instead of just making it about pumping out a bunch of ads… I whammy’d it with pumping out a bunch of ads that CONVERT! But not just “CoNvErT” like the bros say. But convert like a BAT OUT OF HELL! (People remember VISUALS) And then of course… I added more bullets to tease and titillate =) Muhahaha! Gahhh can you tell I’m having so much fun roasting my own copy?! Well, don’t let me hog all the fun! If you want me to PERSONALLY roast your copy — I’m hosting a live call in CopyCreator Club today at 12PM EST. You can bring your emails, ads, sales pages, offer… any copy you have… And I will personally roast it alongside the other fantastic copywriters that will be on the call. If that sounds like it could put a load of cashola in your pocket… CLICK THIS LINK TO CHECKOUT COPYCREATOR CLUB.☝️☝️☝️ See you on the call? Your friend, Alin “Super Saiyan Copywriter” Dragu P.S. Last week we roasted… — Max S’s VSL to help him get more Shockwave Therapy Clinic clients — Wardan J’s creative strategist profile to help him land more high ticket clients — Karla F’s private newsletter offer to bring in sponsorships to her 10,000+ email list — Peter N’s sales page to help him sell more of his own gems and jewerly — Zac G’s VSL to help him convert more high ticket home services clients for his email marketing agency — Toni K’s email so he can sign more high ticket clients from his own email list — Olive’s weight loss email sequences that she’s writing for her own clients (so her client will love her copy more, make more money and retain her longer) It’s gonna cost you north of $200+ to get ONE roast from any quality copywriter… and I’m including FOUR live calls per month with roast for just $50. If that’s not helpful to you, this ain’t for you. But if it is.
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