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Yesterday, I dabbled into YouTube Studio to see... Almost 10,000 views this month! Fantastic! I’m really helping people… ahhh this feels really good to be helping really good people who really care abou— Huh? What’s this? A brand new comment on my latest video? @AMINPURESERVICE • 5 Hours Ago Proven system to write colde email And what is the. Killer mistake that moste your student do when it’s comes to writing colde email and how to avoid it. . I really need the answer. THAT’S IT!SET MY CHANNEL ON FIRE BECAUSE IF THESE ARE THE PEOPLE “BENEFITING” FROM MY BLOOD, SWEAT &TEARS AND THESE ARE THE QUESTIONS THEY’RE ASKING……LET’S JUST SHUT IT DOWN RIGHT NOW!Listen… I thought this goes without saying but apparently I was wrong 😅 If you can’t write a YouTube comment… you have no business being anywhere near a cold email trying to get any sort of human to pay you for something you clearly can’t do. So there it is AMINPURESERVICE… I’ve given you the answer on a rusted platter: The Killer mistake that moste me student does when comee to emailzz is suckng at emailzz. THE OTHER MISTAKE THAT MOSTE ME STUDENT DOES MAKE WITH ICE COLD EMAILZZ IS…Leaving it ICE COLD! A few years back when I was still heavily focused on client work, one of the most profitable projects I ever had came from a “warm-ish” email I sent. AKA a cold email that I melted the ice on. It was this golf gear company that I personally loved. I spent a ton of money with these guys. I bought hats, shorts, belts, cashmere sweaters. The whole shabang. But I noticed their email sequences sucked bootay. So I recorded a Loom video explaining why it’s bad, how I’ve fixed this stuff before and exactly what they need to do to fix it whether they hire me or not. And I started with video with… HEY GUYS! I BOUGHT ALL YOUR STUFF! I’M A CUSTOMER!I even wore their brand’s hat in the video. The loom took me 45 minutes to record because I wrote strategy for it, outlined a ho’ bunch of problems in high detail… And I dropped “golf industry” terminology in the video so they could sense that I knew what TF I’m talking about. And they ate it up! NOM NOM NOM! GOBBLE GOBBLE GOBBLE! All in all, between the Loom and the email I sent them… I invested almost two hours into that one “cold” email. Which led to an almost immediate response from their CMO (who forwarded it to their list manager) who then hired me on a performance basis to rework their current flows. It didn’t end up becoming a retainer but… THAT PROJECT CHECK WAS PHAT.Needless to say, our boy AMINPURESERVICE wasn’t tryin’ to hear all that. Nor are most people. They don’t wanna hear that I spent almost two hours personalizing my outreach. They don’t wanna hear that it took me years of sharpening my skills to even be able to break down their flows like that. Or that I spent a buttload of cashola buying that brand's products before reaching out. Or that I didn’t simply stroke Claude Diddly for a “ Proven system to write colde email “ that spams people with… UH QUICK QUESTION!Please open this email sir, quick question, sir please sir. Hark unto me: That crap don’t work, won’t work and shouldn’t work. Instead, you can bite off a lil’ bit of my wisdom that I used to cook up such a phat check for that golf brand some time ago by watching this YouTube video I made showing you how to write e-com emails in my El Copy Goat style 👇 Hilarious enough, I made this video a year ago and it ain’t aged a bit. Unlike the “ Proven system to write colde email “ that plebs post online. While you’re on my channel, make sure to binge it up. We gotta cross 10,000 views today, cool? Yours Truly, Alin “Email Goat” Dragu
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I help you write emails people love to read & buy from. Read by 1,800+ Copywriters. Delivered daily at 5:15AM.